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I MAY BE WRITING A FAN FICTION ABOUT THIS AND I WANT PLOT IDEAS!!! PLEASE COMMENT WITH SUGGESTIONS!

Okay so I saw this picture of a mermaid yesterday [link] (it's pretty gory, so don't click if you're sensative to lots of blood and guts and a poor little mermaid girl getting chopped into pieces)

and anyway, it got me looking at other pictures of mermaids and stuff (much less gory) of course, you know, just lookin for some nice pictures of bewbs etc. So in my search, I realized that there are a lot of really pretty fin designs and stuff, like they're not all just the steriotypical "The Little Mermaid" style, so it got me thinking...

I'd also like to credit ~AkatsukiMemberWoolfy for some of my inspiration for having written a fan fiction (SasoDei) lately where Deidara was a goldfish that turned human by touching human skin [link] .

Also I would like to credit my big brother ~AlexKingOfTheDamned for his cosplay design [link] with the beautiful spotted koi fish.

I took these three ideas into consideration as I came up with this idea and a kind of back story to go with it...

Who knows? I may end up writing a short fanfiction about this… any takers?

So Deidara is a merman (that much is obvious ne?) he’s got the pretty spotted koi fish thing going on, but he’s still an ocean merman. So he likes to swim close to shore and listen to the waves crashing against the beach because he thinks it’s the most beautiful sight and sound in the world, beauty for an instant, then the waves recede… art… you know the drill. So one day, one of the other merfolk, Hidan no less, decides to pull a prank on Deidara and ties his tailfin to an anchor he pulled off of a sunken ship. Of course merfolk can only breathe underwater, so it’s no problem that Deidara sinks right to the bottom, the problem is that so far towards the shore, he gets caught in the undertow and a huge wave carries him ashore where he is beached over a rock and can’t reach his tail to undo the anchor. He is stranded there for a long while, the rock being half-submerged so that hardly anyone on the beach can see him, but too close to the shore for any of the merfolk to dare trying to rescue him. Finally the tide goes all the way out, leaving Deidara totally beached, baking in the sun and unable to breathe (note the gills on his neck, he can’t breathe air). Now Inuyasha’s spending a day at the beach with his best friend Miroku who is trying to get the hanyou’s mind off of his recent breakup with his longtime girlfriend Kagome. They’re just bumming around, looking at all the hot chicks in bikinis and walking up the beach when Inuyasha spots the gigantic tail fin draped over the rock thinking that some big fish got washed up on shore. Of course when he runs over to investigate what does he find? Deidara of course!

I’ll let you think about the rest of the story, I already have a clichéd plot in mind, but I actually want to ask you for suggestions!!!

[EDIT] I decided to go with an original universe theme (for Inuyasha at least) instead of AU. Prologue here. I did a lot of research on geography and mythology to put it together, I hope you love it!

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:iconfreaknweird65:
Freaknweird65 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
Poor little coi-merman! I hope Inuyasha helps, but he'll probably just poke it with a stick for a while before doing anything about it.
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Stelera Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There's a whole fan fiction based on this one picture if you want to find out what really happens!
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Freaknweird65 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
is there a link to it?
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Stelera Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure is. [link] It's a little heavy on the details and it is a shonen ai... just a heads up.
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Freaknweird65 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
*shrugs
meh, I'll try it anyways ^^
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Stelera Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
enjoyed?
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Freaknweird65 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
yep ^^
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Stelera Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much!
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EVAUnit4A Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
I have a folder in my Favorites dedicated exclusively to non-Disney mermaids, so if you wanna brows through there for ideas...? ;)
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I already have a solid discription for all my characters, but I did look through the folder ^_^ would you mind reading my first couple of chapters? maybe give me some feedback?
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werewolfninja96 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome :)
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! there is now a fanfiction to go with it too! (or at least the beginnings of one)
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wilberarthur Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
YEA GO INU!
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
da dada da! Inuyasha to the rescue!
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bob-brown Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
This is awesome~ Can I do a picture of Mermaid Dei? (I probably won't post it)
And yeah, you really should make a story with this >w<
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awsome you totally should! and you should totally post it!
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bob-brown Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
I'm currently trying. I have now found out how badly I can't draw guys. Better get practicing I guess^^
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
practice makes perfect... well that's not true, there is no such thing as perfect in art XDDD
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bob-brown Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Oh my god, I agree! There is no such thing as perfect~ That reminds me of the crazy science guy (I forgot who he is) in Bleach. :P
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've only watched the Bleach Movie XD
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bob-brown Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
I've read a bit of the manga but nothing else. I gave up since I lost my spot :P
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD oh, have you seen I posted the prologue to my fanfiction about merman Deidara XD
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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Poor Deidara XD
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yup, he's suffocating. thanks for the inspiration!!! 8D
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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed XD Lolz No problemo ^O^
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor dei, he's not like the little mermaid, he'll die outa water for too long
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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed XD Lolz
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
quite! he be suffering big time! oh but you're good at inventing magic, and merfolk are different from magic fish so I say screw to copying your idea of the saliva or blood thing to let him breathe... I am thinking that eating human food will turn them human... of course I also think that is really lame... would you mind helping me?
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AkatsukiMemberWoolfy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm, I wouldnt reckon human food would be too good an idea cause it has lots of complications, like would eating fish and chips be considered human food or merfood? XD Lolz Maybe he has to have something of human creation touching him, like Inuyasha can give him a necklace, or braclet, or shirt or something XD
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm that is an idea... I also had another thought, that perhaps there is a talisman, some sunken treasure that will turn merfolk human on contact, but it rests at the bottom of the bay and Deidara nearly drouns getting the talisman because once he grabs it he immediately starts turning human.
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Gonorrhea-chan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
BRILLIANT!!!!! :hug:
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you... I think ^^;
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Gonorrhea-chan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
that is good
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deidaraobito Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
-decided not to read description cause im lazy-
deidara looks pretty dead ._. . . .
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
he's suffocating, can't breathe out of the water. thinking of writing a fan fiction based on this. any plot suggestions?
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deidaraobito Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
xDDD omg. . . . you should like make someone be chasing him like kisame or something and then he should like mget hit with kisames sward and get stuck on the beach by that xDDD
._. yes. . . . i know it fails .. . .
and make inuyasha go down there cause hes being chased by bumblebees xDD
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
please read the discription, I have the first part of the fic (up to the point of the picture) all figured out already
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deidaraobito Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
i didnt wanna read it cause it looked like alot of words xDDD do something where itachi sends a bunch of bumblebees
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ffffff Itachi is a sea-otter in this XDDD HAHA! mermaid friends XDDD no, Inuyasha went to the beach with Miroku to help him get over his recent break up with Kagome. Deidara likes watching the waves break on the shore (ocean version of explosions) but Hidan ties an anchor to his tailfin and he gets caught in the undertow and carried ashore by a huge wave.
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deidaraobito Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
xDD omg hidan, that bitch!
just make soneone be chased by bumble bees xDDDD
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what's the sudden obsession with bees?
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itachis-twin Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Awwwww! :heart: You are excellent! :huggle: When I saw your work, just shine a happy smile! You're a miracle! *jumping on the couch* :D
Deidara so cool! He was after the storm passed to the bank? You wrote a lot of comments, and I was so hard to read a lot! But I read it, the devil's sake! >зD
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it wasn't a srotm. Hidan tied his tail to an anchor and he got caught in the undertoe and washed up in a big wave. I felt like a storm would be too cliche.

let me try something!

позвольте мне пробовать кое-что!

это не был шторм. Hidan связывал его хвост с якорем, и он был пойман в undertoe и выбросил на берег в большой волне. Я чувствовал, что шторм будет также клише.
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itachis-twin Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Thank you so much for the translation, I have tried to read your comment! 8D

Warning too late to read. I saw the picture, I was sick, I realized that is not yet guro .. хЪ
It is a pity that English is not my native language. I would love to read fanfic about Goldfish. :З
Pretty kimono with Deidara, who drew your brother. :meow:
Oh, did not see the gills on his neck, pointed out that thanks!. I liked the sketch to the fanfic! Very! I want romance! Great idea to interpret art explosion in the breaking waves on the beach! You're done! :+favlove:
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Stelera Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Большое спасибо! Я настолько рад, что Вы любите идею заговора, которую я имел. Конечно должен быть роман! Поцелуи рыбы! XDDD я хотел бы взять любые предложения, чтобы Вы имели. Я хочу сделать заговор меньшим количеством клише, потому что в настоящее время - чувства слишком много как "Небольшая Русалка" заговор. Вы понимаете? Я не знаю, переводилось ли то кино когда-либо на русский язык.

Так или иначе, спасибо всегда для ваших комментариев! Я люблю получить известие от Вас. Вы - один из моих лучших наблюдателей.
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